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#1 Yannick

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Posted 21 February 2012 - 06:43 AM

Question your mortality

Like a wisp of smoke

Try to grab it if you must

But it will slip through

Your gentle fingers


Eternity it seems,

for the young and vivid.

But if you ponder upon it,

its duration will leave you livid.


shorter and shorter, every drawn breath

as you try to make your own life longer

try if you must but this is futile, don’t you see?


time passes, nothing to stop it, nothing to slow it.

Even if it seems longer than whatever you might imagine.


Question your mortality.


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#2 iRockagainst

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Posted 21 February 2012 - 09:07 AM

Written pretty well.

Edited by iRockagainst, 21 February 2012 - 11:18 PM.

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#3 brian01001

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Posted 21 February 2012 - 08:30 PM

That is definitely one well written piece.  Keep up the amazing works of art. Hope to see more of them by you. :-)
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